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Darkswan
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2022-05-05 00:39

it's a good read, quite simple to understand, the Mc of this story is likable, there are very few mistakes, the world background, however, I would give that a 4/5, overall the author did a good job here, keep up the good work.

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Hey all, before you continue the book, here are some points that I would clarify: 1] This book is completely fictional, so hence, please don't apply too much common sense at times. Of course, that doesn't mean just anything is possible. 2] Basic English language: Yes, the book has basic English. What I mean by that is, there is no complex sentence forming or there are hardly any complex words used. Anyone can hope into this! 3] The Author is present: I totally look at the comments. If you feel like something needs to be edited, just leave the paragraph comment or chapter comment. It will be edited within 48 working hours. 4] Power stones? Do they exist?: Of course they do. So I really hope that you would feed this book some power stones, if it gets hungry, it might stop updating... 5] Golden Tickets and Events: There will be events mentioned in the announcement section of this book (just above the author's note) and it will be mostly related to Golden Tickets. Real the goal, and earn the rewards! 6] Haters: Haters? Not necessarily. In fact, I would call you fantastic creatures that let me improve! You can hope on and criticize as much as you want. Of course, the reply will be just a - 'lol'. 7] Fans: The word itself describes everything. Much respect to them. 8] Plot Armor: MAX! Sometimes the plot armor might be lying around so yeah, don't you go wearing it. Our mc needs it!! 9] Gifts: Really? You won't gift me? Up to you, XD. You love the book, go ahead and gift it. Both of us will gain an advantage, you will have earned a good karma, and I... *cough* I will earn MONEY! 10] I'm tired: Ya, I'm too tired writing this long review as well as many chapters daily. Any idea to cheer me up? Yes, go ahead and give reviews and comments to make me feel fantastic and rejuvenate!

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