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ViduusLv152yr
2022-04-08 10:02

read up to chaptor 21 which is the most updated chaptor right now. I can say I really like the plot, and the ideas that the author seems to try to be going with. with that said though, 4 chaptors of what I would call worthless back story is kinda a let down. I can see certain back stories in the future but 1 back story taking up 3 chaptors alone is a problem. that back story was not needed tbh. I just feel 3 chaptors were wasted on which could have been action or something else. chaptor 21 is also a start of another back story so we will get atleast 5 or 6 chaptors in a row of back story that is prolly wasted chaptors. good thing is atleast I am not paying for it or I would be a unhappy camper.

SOUL: Supreme Overlord's Unknown Legacy

1st_Manga_KING
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1st_Manga_KING
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ya mate, I was going to have the backstories told later but then my editor said that the locked chapters need not have it. so I had to technically force them here. don't worry, the backstory ends right away, in next chapter

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