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Para1
Para1Lv23yr
2022-03-26 02:24

interesting characters, good worldbuilding, and great character styles. to take a concept of God and turn it into a boring life of a warrior who became a god was certainly a great concept. I mean you can't make someone who has spent all their lives fighting just sit and get bored. the chaps were long which wasn't a bad thing cuz I wasn't overwhelmed by it. all in all a great read 10/10

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Photosphere
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It is an interesting premise but lacks impact. *Writing Quality: It's a great usage of English; almost no typos, great distribution of paragraphs, 5/5. *Stability of Updates: Since it's new, gonna give it 5/5. *Story Development: Moving steadily though with not a definite objective; MC stopped being a god because he was 'bored' and also because he didn't want to be a virgin, but going through such a path is going to draw him across precisely the same path he had gone through before, 4/5. *Character Design: It's well described; clothing descriptions, a brief of MC's mentality; there are varieties of characters and not everyone is a woman; they're all properly described, the relationships between them are coherent with one another, but even then, MC's ambitions are rather lacking for the kind of individual he's supposed to be to have reached the altitude he did, although I believe this is a point for comedy, I can't stop taking it as an incoherence. 3/5. *World Background: It lacks several points of scenery description such as the majesty of the God Realm where he was or the nimble mortal realm; but quite decent, 4/5. My personal issue is that he has reached the point of God Hood, having lived for long before finally entering the God Realm; perhaps a few thousand years minimum living in whatever realm before eventually entering the Realm of The Gods. Yet he's a virgin... when you see a God that's virgin; it's because he wants to be... now he's being sent to a world to repeat exactly the same progress from before, just that this time he won't be virgin... it lessens the original premise considerably as the title alone is enough to draw people in; you'd assume he has already lived through everything and he's just bored, but that's not the case... he doesn't showcase the personality of someone that has already gone through such a life. Once again I understand it's for comedy purposes, but it doesn't sit well with me (subjective opinion) Still, the story is in an early stage to judge further. Best Regards!

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