Review Detail of Feldrikk in Eating Souls In Another World

Item: Eating Souls In Another World
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

FeldrikkLv112yrFeldrikk

Seems really interesting but the lack of revision on the texts and the way the author displays some of the information makes it hard to have high expectations in the long term :( I'll keep it saved and read more once the chapters have accumulated a bit and edit my review then gl on your journey Mr Author, we all start somewhere and I hope you can make this into a fine story :P

Eating Souls In Another World

Dmanga_lover

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Dmanga_loverAuthorDmanga_lover

Thanks for reading. And man, some mistakes will make it into the final product no matter how many times you revise it. I'm confident that the quality of my writing is far better than what you'd usually find on this platform.

2yr

FeldrikkLv11Feldrikk

yes, *some* mistakes, not a few every couple of paragraphs. putting in the extra effort rather than trying to find a good excuse like I've seen you do in the other reviews and on the Facebook group is also something you should work on... I've been reading here for years across multiple accounts and I can confidently say your writing is not as good as you think it is lol

Dmanga_lover:Thanks for reading. And man, some mistakes will make it into the final product no matter how many times you revise it. I'm confident that the quality of my writing is far better than what you'd usually find on this platform.

2yr

Dmanga_loverAuthorDmanga_lover

Is that so...😥 well, thanks for your honest opinion. I'll do my best to better edit before releasing. I'd be happy if you point out any mistakes you notice from now on.

2yr