The story makes decent use of the English language, with only a few grammar mistakes that can be easily corrected (like in the first chapter, there was a stray "did" somewhere at the beginning). Premise seems interesting from the get-go, since it's not often I get to read about a story centered on triplets adventuring. Characters could do with some more exposition at the start so readers can relate to or enjoy their individual and group dynamics a little more, but they seem fun so far! Story jumps forward a little too fast at some points, but if that's your style, then that's fine! Looking forward to more, author! đ
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