the_mainspring
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Thank you so much for all the comments wahhhh I only just saw them now ๐ญ๐ญI'm really, really grateful for your constant supportโI really do mean it when I say that your kindness is a great motivation for me to keep going (be it with writing, or drawing, or anything else really), I hope you know that!! Seeing your enthusiasm and interest in my works is the best thing any author can ask for, and I'm truly lucky and thankful that you consider my content as something you like enough to give feedback like this for ใ ใ Thank you so, so much!!! ๐๐๐ I'll do my best in writing the updates for this too!! ๐
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The story makes decent use of the English language, with only a few grammar mistakes that can be easily corrected (like in the first chapter, there was a stray "did" somewhere at the beginning). Premise seems interesting from the get-go, since it's not often I get to read about a story centered on triplets adventuring. Characters could do with some more exposition at the start so readers can relate to or enjoy their individual and group dynamics a little more, but they seem fun so far! Story jumps forward a little too fast at some points, but if that's your style, then that's fine! Looking forward to more, author! ๐
The story is interesting so far, author! There's great potential for the characters we've met so far, I'm looking forward to more updates and developments! Thank you for sharing your work with us ๐
You are honestly an angel and I am so grateful that you often take the time to leave such long, thoughtful comments to my works ๐ญ๐๐ Not to be too extreme or anything, but you're like the Kim Dokja to my tls123โif Han Sooyoung could feel envious at her other self for having such a loyal reader, that would be me at me because I have you ๐๐ Really, your words make this all worth it!! I'm really happy to know your in-depth feedback on everything going on ๐๐ About MJ and Sofia...we shall see a bit of their past in future chapters, maybe? ๐ But yes, even intimacy can be iffy with MJ, despite the fact that she's already Fia's closest friend. We'll see eventually on the story for this, so please stay tuned (lol)! ๐ Fia is, indeed, very deep in love with Royโthough the question remains on what kind it is! That'll be cleared up too in the next chapters, since I love communication ahahah Again, thank you so much for the support as always!!! You really make my year with all your comments ๐
Wow, the nerve of that guy!!
Okay wow, that's brutal
Hmm I wonder how Su Lan is going to turn out as a character? Curious to know more, author!
Ahaha that's so blunt, I appreciate the sass๐๐
Oh no ): It sucks that she has to think of her usefulness like that with her own parent.
Oh no, even mother has no words for her face...๐
Oh? I wonder what happened? ๐ค
I want a friend like MJ too ๐ญ๐And yes, there's some backstory to Fia behaving that way, but that'll be for much, much later!! I'm so happy you noticed it aaa ๐๐๐ And thank you so much for pointing that specific bit out, about Fia acknowledging her dark thoughts but not giving in to them!! I enjoyed writing that bit in, so I'm glad to know it made a bit of an impact on you too ๐ฅบ๐ I'll eventually add in more bits and pieces on their history together, so please look forward to it!! Thank you so much too, for reading and leaving such a lovely comment!! ๐
I'M LAUGHING why did you have to call me out like that ๐ญ๐ I'm so happy you're taking the time to give such thoughtful comments!! Your messages quite literally had me rolling around in bed and kicking my feet from joy ๐๐ I'm really glad to know that you're noticing the patterns I've been setting for their characters too!! Thank you so much for reading, and for all the support ๐๐ I hope you know that your messages really brighten up my day!
!!! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me! I'm super happy to know that you're curious to know more about them, it feels like my children are being recognized ahah ๐ I'll do my best with future updates too, thank you so much for the support! ๐
Far too relatable, Kim Dokja...I too felt this way when I got to the very end of you story. Reading this all over again to find everything I missed on the first read!