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I quite like this premise, especially the plan to build up her reputation once again as well as all of the world building opportunities provided. I appreciate the author calling out potential plot holes, it was a quirky little bit that acknowledged what tends to be glossed over in reincarnation style stories. I hope to see this story continue, the writing is excellent─ if maybe a little short (I'm greedy)─and the story appears to have a clear plan drawn out without being overtly predictable. I especially like the Goddess of Misfortune and the clumsy personality that accompanies her. My only true issue would be the limited chapters with a hope that it continues, as of chapter 5 I feel like I just started to get into the story and I'm left with a 'New chapter is coming soon...' I do hope that is true.

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Reincarnation of the Archmage

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Hi, author here, I plan to continue the story this May and update the chapters time to time after our exams. Thank you and greatly appreciated this detailed review. This would help me more for the future endeavors of the story.