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K_Sidhu_2892
K_Sidhu_2892Lv141yr
2023-12-23 08:58

The story is amazing and fantastic, I love it and would have loved to give 5 Stars but the revealing that he is reincarnated and has a system really makes it uncomfortable for me to read and I really hate it when he just tells people about the system!

A Gamer Into Trails

Aht
4.7
376 Chs

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Aht
AhtAuthor

Thanks for the review! MC told one person and one person only. I have no plans to have him tell anyone else presently. He told that one person since he wantec to learn under her and the fact she knows mind magic so I felt it was appropriate. ^_^.

1yr
K_Sidhu_2892
K_Sidhu_2892Lv14

Thanks for the reply and I have reached volume 3 and it was a very good read. I wanted to ask, why did the MC join the Ouroboros knowing that it is a crime syndicate?, as it did not explain in the chapter. Still a good novel, keep up the good work.

Aht:Thanks for the review! MC told one person and one person only. I have no plans to have him tell anyone else presently. He told that one person since he wantec to learn under her and the fact she knows mind magic so I felt it was appropriate. ^_^.
1yr
Aht
AhtAuthor

No problem! In my eyes I see Ouroboros more as a shadow organization who does stuff behind the scenes. They may appear as criminals on the outside, but many speculate the Grandmaster is the Goddess herself. They have shared goals to benefit the world as a whole, even if they take extreme measures to accomplish them. MC's interests lay similarly to theirs, so I decided for him to be in cooperation. Ouroboros isn't like Revache, whose an actual mafia syndicate.

K_Sidhu_2892:Thanks for the reply and I have reached volume 3 and it was a very good read. I wanted to ask, why did the MC join the Ouroboros knowing that it is a crime syndicate?, as it did not explain in the chapter. Still a good novel, keep up the good work.
1yr
K_Sidhu_2892
K_Sidhu_2892Lv14

Ok, I just don’t like the Ouroboros as they pretty much do nothing benefit the world and they also keeps being defeated by the protagonists.

Aht:No problem! In my eyes I see Ouroboros more as a shadow organization who does stuff behind the scenes. They may appear as criminals on the outside, but many speculate the Grandmaster is the Goddess herself. They have shared goals to benefit the world as a whole, even if they take extreme measures to accomplish them. MC's interests lay similarly to theirs, so I decided for him to be in cooperation. Ouroboros isn't like Revache, whose an actual mafia syndicate.
1yr
K_Sidhu_2892
K_Sidhu_2892Lv14

Also, sorry if I am bugging you with these.

K_Sidhu_2892:Ok, I just don’t like the Ouroboros as they pretty much do nothing benefit the world and they also keeps being defeated by the protagonists.
1yr
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