First, the writing quality is really good. I don't notice many grammatical errors or spelling mistakes. And the few that I do, don't disrupt the flow of the story, or break the immersion. Earlier on there might have been more, but I can't remember. Though nowadays it seems like there's none at all. Speaking of earlier on to nowadays, the story development has been amazing. It's not too fast paced, nor to slow. It's well balanced with the arcs. While there are time skips, they're short bursts rather than years at a time. So the flow is nice, and smooth. Now is really hard to recommend someone to read this as the updates are wath drag down this hidden gem, seeing author other 2 works make me have some thrust issues as if he well be dropping this one too and start a new one. So while this novel has suck great promisse is really hard to recommend to someone to read.
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