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SAGELv23yr
2022-03-17 22:48

I really wanna keep reading this but I don't wanna be stupid if I did that most of the characters are more beta shonen that you don't wanna watch it don't even to read it , the power of the mc is op but he is too stupid to use it or the author don't have an imagination and most of the characters like that, even the gods that they suppose to be smarter because they at less they lived over a millions year but the get anger from just a word of a Weak human, and even when they knew he has potentials they want to kill him because they think he could be dangerous on the future, and the emotions of the characters like they don't even know what suppose to feel it, and back to the MC he talks to beings that they could kill him with blink like he is untouchable, and doesn't even make me talk about his dreams like someone had lived on room and watch anime without having any enemies, when the reason of the reason for his death, his father after he killed his girlfriend this novel could never be famous without rewrite it

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You have to think, I am basing gods off of lord, also, if you lived for billions of years, I imagine you’ get tired of life and be short tempered. Also, it is not that the characters are too dumb to use their powers or they can’t, or that I don’t have the imagination, it is that the characters have to show growth, you cannot instantly have everything at once. And the characters do have personalities, for example: Akuro is a rash brute who rarely thinks through his actions, but in some occasions he can be smart. He hides himself from others to avoid hurting them. Darius, does not like to express emotion and would rather use humor, scared to get attached, smart, cunning and often times finds himself jealous of Akuro. Make sense? Also, with the gods being billions of years old, would you not agree that they would be having quite bloated egos which would make them underestimate the Deities, thus getting them killed? You have to think about from other perspectives. ALSO. Akuro does use the main function of death, absorbing aura. His black aura is exactly what that is. His aura, any time it strikes an opponent, will steal aura from that opponent and add it to himself. Thank you for the review, I see where you are coming from, but that is a perspective in which you haven’t gone deep enough into the story to see the full scale. I mean, you are on chap 22? Right, something like that? You haven’t even met Azazel or Moorza yet, the story literally just got started.

Kydul1137
Kydul1137Author

Lore, not lord btw. In almost all forms of lore, the gods are wrathful beings quick to rage.

Kydul1137:You have to think, I am basing gods off of lord, also, if you lived for billions of years, I imagine you’ get tired of life and be short tempered. Also, it is not that the characters are too dumb to use their powers or they can’t, or that I don’t have the imagination, it is that the characters have to show growth, you cannot instantly have everything at once. And the characters do have personalities, for example: Akuro is a rash brute who rarely thinks through his actions, but in some occasions he can be smart. He hides himself from others to avoid hurting them. Darius, does not like to express emotion and would rather use humor, scared to get attached, smart, cunning and often times finds himself jealous of Akuro. Make sense? Also, with the gods being billions of years old, would you not agree that they would be having quite bloated egos which would make them underestimate the Deities, thus getting them killed? You have to think about from other perspectives. ALSO. Akuro does use the main function of death, absorbing aura. His black aura is exactly what that is. His aura, any time it strikes an opponent, will steal aura from that opponent and add it to himself. Thank you for the review, I see where you are coming from, but that is a perspective in which you haven’t gone deep enough into the story to see the full scale. I mean, you are on chap 22? Right, something like that? You haven’t even met Azazel or Moorza yet, the story literally just got started.
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Homie, you made so many grammatical errors I don’t even think you get to have an opinion.

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