Review Detail of Eldritch_Umbra in The Cultivation Tower System

For an ESL Novel, this book is very well written. The descriptions are nice, and the characters are fun. The only issues that I have with this book would mostly be with the grammar. Punctuation is not used correctly, and some scenes are described poorly, either through poor word choice or bizarre sentence structure. While both could be a product of not understanding the English language, a run through Grammarly or getting a beta reader or editor who speaks English would solve this problem,. The dialogue is quite clunky, but the same solution would apply. The world's lore is pretty good, and is explained better than some of the stuff I've seen in other novels. Ultimately, this is a pretty good book, that just needs some editing. 4/5