Review Detail of Excelsior_x in Mom is mine

Chapters are short but overall I liked it. Author did a good job of showing the emotions of the characters in some situations. Since it is short it does live much of the character development falling short but still it is quite enjoyable. I do not like this kind of stories but I found myself wanting to find out what happens in the next chapters. So, overall a nice read for a Sunday with coffee in your hands. Grammar is ok with some little bits of mistakes here and there but did not take anything away from the story, good writing author.