Review Detail of Z_Ril in New Beginning In The Magical World
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this is my personal thought about this story. so don't be mad. the plot is good. but there's not really any wow factor to the mc that makes me as a reader wants to discover. Aside from the mc is reincarnated or transmigrated, whatever you want to called it, there's nothing that made me want to wait from the mc. like sudden boost, exciting fact( something that made him special aside being transmigrated ) or anything really. for example, goku which seemingly had no limits, naruto history, bloodline and weird thought process that made him special, Luffy willpower, and dreams, ichigo bloodline etc etc. this is what made a story excellent, in my opinion at least. this story is more focused to the world development other than anything else. you may like it, but it's not forte so to say.
New Beginning In The Magical World
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You're actually the first person who managed to describe him perfectly. Yes, I do agree with you that my MC doesn't have the wow factor because that's what I want to avoid when I first make this story. I have already read a lot of novels where mc is op which makes it easier for them to overcome all the challenges they fave but in this novel I decided to make my story as a normal human being without any cheats. He would start from being a weak human and only facing countless challenges could make him become stronger. It also adds to the fact that many of the previous novel that I read lost their potential because of the loosy story development the idea is good but due to mc powers everything became to easy for him. There's nothing bad about your opinion I actually appreciate it as you are the first person that I could say managed to give me a true review regarding the story.