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baoxiashun19

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Hi everyone Im 22 a beginner in writing stories and only have a normal hobby of staying at my house while reading some books and watching some anime I'm also called as TheLost One

2017-05-22 JoinedPhilippines
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  • baoxiashun19
    baoxiashun191yr
    Replied to BLANKENDRK

    Thank you for the feedback, I'm glad you like my story and don't worry I have no plans on dropping it.

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  • baoxiashun19
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    Replied to Nyko_Pangca

    Maybe this is a part of a much bigger conspiracy.

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  • baoxiashun19
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    supernormal? the author should other terms.

    That supernormal knowledge was a heaven-grade advanced supernormal knowledge.
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  • baoxiashun19
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    He already has his own consciousness even though he was just a sperm?

    'I-I... am a—sperm?'
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  • baoxiashun19
    baoxiashun191yr
    Replied to Gizmo_48

    I mean nearest city. The reason why I wrote city instead of a town or village is that if they, the people of Florentine city would need to evacuate that place they can only come to the nearest city because a town or village won't be able to support a large volume of people. But it doesn't mean that there wasn't any town or villages nearby it's just that on the huge portion of land own by the Beaufort family there was only 1 main city which is the Florentine city because most of the land that was granted to them by the kings occupied the vast land of enchanted forest.

    Ch 22 Chapter 21: Changes Within The City
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  • baoxiashun19
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    Replied to Gizmo_48

    To reach Florentine city they literally need to travel in the middle of a forest although there were tracks made for their wagons it still wasn't enough for them to have a smooth ride once in a while due to rapid growth of plants they will found obstacles on their path that they need to clear on their own so they need to stop once in a while but if its a lone knight like Hugo or Hubert they can reach the nearest town within two or 3 days. The only reason why they took more time to reach the nearest town is due to their baggage and carriage.

    Ch 22 Chapter 21: Changes Within The City
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  • baoxiashun19
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    they aren't ordinary human to begin with Florentine city is like a military camp were everyone is almost train to become a knight although they weren't able to advance in strength to become a junior knight they still have train theirselves to become an apprentice knight which makes them consumes more food than normal. Growth of plants is also much faster than other places thanks to the influence of enchanted forest.

    Ch 22 Chapter 21: Changes Within The City
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  • baoxiashun19
    baoxiashun191yr
    Replied to Abhishek_Byju_13o3

    Well you kinda get the gist of it.

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  • baoxiashun19
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    I'm starting to feel like this is a poisonous novel should I forget all my rationality before reading this because some of his actions are really dumb and unnatural.

    "Don't be afraid lass. I am an Immortal. I have traveled through forests and deserts to search for a suitable disciple. And you young lady, have caught my eye."
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  • baoxiashun19
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    he transmigrated but hr already knows the people in this new world? that's so sudden

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  • baoxiashun19
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    Replied to Dragister

    Thanks I didn't see this mistake when I reread this chapter

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  • baoxiashun19
    baoxiashun191yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 64 Spirit Energy poisoning
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  • baoxiashun19
    baoxiashun191yr
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    Author you signed a contract congratulations then but Im not aware that they would lock the chapter 41 onwards it's a good thing I already read those parts I like your story keep it up

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  • baoxiashun19
    baoxiashun191yr
    Replied to Dragister

    For clarification Lucas is Hubert's son. Hugo his knight is looking for the partner of his older brother and they're talking about Lucas cousin that he wasn't aware of since his existence should be kept a secret. But thank you for pointing this out I'll need to fix this since other people might also get confused

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  • baoxiashun19
    baoxiashun191yr
    Replied to Red_baron

    Don't worry I didn't sign the contract.

    Ch 34 Chapter 33: The Great Movement
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  • baoxiashun19
    baoxiashun191yr
    Replied to Z_Ril

    You're actually the first person who managed to describe him perfectly. Yes, I do agree with you that my MC doesn't have the wow factor because that's what I want to avoid when I first make this story. I have already read a lot of novels where mc is op which makes it easier for them to overcome all the challenges they fave but in this novel I decided to make my story as a normal human being without any cheats. He would start from being a weak human and only facing countless challenges could make him become stronger. It also adds to the fact that many of the previous novel that I read lost their potential because of the loosy story development the idea is good but due to mc powers everything became to easy for him. There's nothing bad about your opinion I actually appreciate it as you are the first person that I could say managed to give me a true review regarding the story.

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  • baoxiashun19
    baoxiashun191yr
    Replied to Z_Ril

    ehem. yeah it's him. that man, who is ultra famous in our history his name is based on him

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  • baoxiashun19
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    Commented

    This is the most normal way to die on old age

    I don't know about others, but for me, death was akin to peace and serenity, the moment where one finally got to truly rest.
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  • baoxiashun19
    baoxiashun191yr
    Replied to Z_Ril

    Thank you at first I thought that lucas is a unique name that was rarely use in a novel but I'm wrong since I also read a lot of novel with the same name and I swear I didn't know that 😂

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  • baoxiashun19
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    Replied to wap100

    Michael's charm only affects normal human whether it's a man or woman but later on as lucas becomes an official knight it would wear off.

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