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akasuna123
akasuna123Lv53yr
2022-03-12 07:36

fanfiction is cringey and uncool farcry from the fanfiction it was inspired from sorry. .. ... ... ... .... . ... .. ... . ... ... ... .. ..

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SCP_0999
SCP_0999Lv4

It's his first-time Akasuna. Go is easy with him.

GodOfTrollingCosmo
GodOfTrollingCosmoLv1

haha akasuna123 can i axe(ask) you a question? why are you so salty to a fanfic thats not very ice(nice) of you.

akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

it's an honest review. You are nothing but a troll so don't talk back

GodOfTrollingCosmo:haha akasuna123 can i axe(ask) you a question? why are you so salty to a fanfic thats not very ice(nice) of you.
GodOfTrollingCosmo
GodOfTrollingCosmoLv1

you just don't have the braincell to have morals to newer author. such high standards like a rich person somewhere.

akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

like I said troll

GodOfTrollingCosmo:you just don't have the braincell to have morals to newer author. such high standards like a rich person somewhere.
ExArgentum
ExArgentumLv14

Can you include the aspects of the story that you liked and what specific parts were “cringe and uncool?” All I get from this “review” is that you don’t like it because of something and I have to take your word for it. Would help a lot in figuring out if I want to read this.

GodOfTrollingCosmo
GodOfTrollingCosmoLv1

if i wanted to troll i would've done it already and adding one to many more i trolled by you? wont one add much tho its like a drop on a bucket. its pointless

Krishnbarad
KrishnbaradLv4

uuf there is a first time for everything 😌

SCP_0999:It's his first-time Akasuna. Go is easy with him.
Krishnbarad
KrishnbaradLv4

still you over did a bit, not complaining though 😂

akasuna123:it's an honest review. You are nothing but a troll so don't talk back
Godfather_
Godfather_Lv1

It honestly wasnt even that harsh

KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv5

well, i don't see any insults here but can you give a more meaningful review? Like what fanfic it was base on?

akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

they should have put the name in the synopsis. from what I know the author deleted the story but I think someone saved and reposted it.

KING_IN_YELLOW:well, i don't see any insults here but can you give a more meaningful review? Like what fanfic it was base on?
WildPolarBear
WildPolarBearAuthor

Hey akasuna I've been reading this thread and I just want to say thanks for the honest criticism. Ik some people might be arguing but ik how it is. It was very cringe but I've gone back and changed some things. I would encourage you to reread or continue if you would. The name has also always been in the synopsis. Thanks anyways!

akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

thanks maybe I was a little harsh. I apologize if that's the case maybe I will check it out later 😉

WildPolarBear:Hey akasuna I've been reading this thread and I just want to say thanks for the honest criticism. Ik some people might be arguing but ik how it is. It was very cringe but I've gone back and changed some things. I would encourage you to reread or continue if you would. The name has also always been in the synopsis. Thanks anyways!
ThisNovelSucksBro
ThisNovelSucksBroLv3

Very nice, thank you for your well thought out review! "cringey and uncool" that helps me very much when deciding to read this or not. Smoke poles bro

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