Review Detail of MystiC in Warlock of the Multiverse

Shameless Author here. I just wanted to thank you all for reading. I will appreciate it a lot if you give me suggestions and such to help me write and evolve my writing. The story involved mutiple worlds, there will be harem later on but only 2-3 members. The MC is neutral evil. If you have any questions feel free to ask here. Give this story a chance, you might like it. Enjoy and have fun.