Review Detail of BakaTaka91 in My Cultivation Augment System

So after reading the first arc (30 chapters) i think I can give this a fair review, the character are good the author really tries to develop them but this make the pacing a bit slow sometimes, as for now the MC barely cultivated, but it looks like he will pick up his pace, things that I thnk would make the novel better would be more action and fights, developing the plot is nice but we need fight too. The spelling is good, but some times I find his grammar a bit weird