is the eternal sun sect flames better than the normal one? (luckas flame turned yellow and the Magnus guy had his Qi yellow too)

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lol author is setting up for the sect leader of the Eternals Sun, the strange guy who talked alone (Maven?) and the Left Guardian to met

great chapter

yo finally you got contract, really looking to read you continue this novel

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So after reading the first arc (30 chapters) i think I can give this a fair review, the character are good the author really tries to develop them but this make the pacing a bit slow sometimes, as for now the MC barely cultivated, but it looks like he will pick up his pace, things that I thnk would make the novel better would be more action and fights, developing the plot is nice but we need fight too. The spelling is good, but some times I find his grammar a bit weird