A couple of red flags to note: 1. a system in marvel 2. it's a sentient system 3. MC name system 4. System is literally starting and engaging in conversation 5. Author hasn't done much research about spiderman

it's like a speedrun in written form..............................................................................................................

Writer needs to brush up on his Marvel knowledge..................................................................................................

First off it feels more like an 14 yos wet dream. Like wtaf, the fights scenes, super awesome spy, stark level physics, calling himself a genius every other paragraph. Everything I brought up is how everyone speaks or the author narrated. The grammar is a problem in itself, every chapter their is something wrong and I personally don't like when conversations feel like a bulletin board. The author definitely only watched the newer spidermans and maybe dabbled in some marvel/spiderman ff.

The system is like way Op it can bring stuff from the future and the only thing the mc has to do in exchange is work out harder. The system also pays for the Mc's gym membership. The system can talk like a normal person and nick fury is the principle. In this story, nick likes to dress up as a principal and curse a lot

Dropping I can’t stand to read this anymore and that’s coming from a guy capablenof reading MTL Writing style hurts especially the “Me:” Action/story has no depth and conversations are very two dimensional I’ve yet to recieve any entsrtainment from reading this book as of chapter 6 yes, That is all I could last for

god, i feel like im reading two robot making a play for dozens of characters. even worst would be one person talking to himself. .. ... . .

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It's clear that the author don't know anything about marvel, and the speed is just so... 🔥 Demasiado rápido el avance sin ningún desarrollo real por parte del mc.

do give a read if you don't care about realism. but this is a list of fault till ch 16. 1. head of super spy organization have time to play as principal/ head master 2. skill system that deals with skill some how have magic to clean sweat and spawning a high tech computer 3. way too much use of emoji 4. the way that the Mc act is like he wants people to know that he is spiderman, like Nick say he give you the warehouse and then he when to the place and ask the police to own it and later if they see Peter Parker as the owner is just stupid 5. romance scene if you can even called it that, it is more like you feed them aphrosidiac and get together. 6. first a system with a personality and then an AI with personality and they both are able to use emoji anyway if you don't care about all those stuff and just want story without any realism then give it a try