Review Detail of SkyNeves in Supreme General Reborn In Dxd With One Wish.(Verse)

Hi! This review is made after 10 chapters... and why 10 and not the +100? Because I don't know if I want to keep reading it but anyway let's focus on the review. For those who might want to bash me I'll make a scale of my ratings: 1⭐-Yikes/Very Bad 2⭐-Not that Bad 3⭐-Normal/Not bad but not good either 4⭐-Good/Yeah I can get down to this 5⭐-Very Good/WOW 😲 Now with that out of the way let's get started. 1- Writing Quality: There is a need to clean up all the early chapters: grammar, thoughts and speech quotation marks, and how certain characters speak. Examples: Grammar[Lefted=Left] this is the most recent one and it hurt a lot(for me). Thoughts: .'Maybe it's just my opinion". this is supposed to be something think 'this would look more pleasing.' to me. Dialogue: ."I see this a lot.' and I don't know why. "Why not do it like this?" Regarding characters I'll go to in later. [2⭐ Here] 2- Story Development: At first it was great for me, specially the first chapter. But then most things seemed forced or unnatural like him having everything he needs(sugar daddy God for the win) and the author even mentioned it was (plot). For someone who was given lots of money he could've easily went out and bought stuff he needed and it would've been interesting to see him interact with the world. There are other things that I could point out but it would be too much hard work. [3⭐ Here] 3- Character Design: I could talk about the MC but there are also lots of inconsistencies in almost all the other characters I've seen so far compared to their OG selves but it's fanfiction so it could be their default behavior. Going back to the MC for someone who lived +50 years he's doesn't act that mature and it even be attributed to teen hormones because he has lived as one for more than a week. Even if he was a warmonger or battle junkie outside of those situations he should be more idk, try picturing a gamer mind influenced character. That's how I imagine a war veteran and most powerful man of his world to be like, someone who only gets excited when he's fighting because the rest isn't as trilling. Anyway that's my opinion. [3⭐ Here] 4- Update Stability: I added the book today but from the date of the postings the chapters seem to be consistent. But there was a period where there weren't being posted so it could be something personal. [5⭐ Here] 5- World Background: The world is introduced as DxD would so we have a general understanding of it but the author also mentions the scenes which is good but there's not enough detail for it to paint a picture. Specially for someone who watched DxD a long time ago or hasn't even watched it. [4⭐ Here] [Overall: 3.4] Well my recommendation for those who just found the book is to give it a try, because what might not work for me might be tolerable or might work out for you. I'm still going to read a bit more, need to get to the first +18 scene to know if it's even worth keeping going.