Item: The new horizon
Rating: 2.4
Author: Little_El

Little_ElLv310mth

2024-06-22 20:41

The idea behind the story is good but poorly executed , pretending to have amnesia is reckless it is the Middle Ages, with these changes we could promote the idea that it is possessed, the conversations are grating , I grimace at every word spoken , we can see the lack of intelligence of the MC, he cannot form a viable plan to improve his home,he makes so many mistakes in such a short time

The new horizon

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