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This is really good. Grammar is hardly any trouble, aside from the occasional jumbled up words but otherwise really good. The way the story is written and how it takes a twist off of the original is really well done, only flaw is the start which is a little rough around the edges. The development of the characters involved as well is the areas is also pretty good. Really so far it's well done to the point there isn't much to comment on. Keep up the good work