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2022-06-11 07:50

I don’t often review, but I feel like I need to drop one here before the story progresses too much, as it has potential. Story is good, characters are good, although they could be a little more flushed out, while the world at the moment is a little generic. Main issue I have is the writing quality. This is one of those odd balls where it seems the quality actually went down as the story progressed. Once we started getting to the paid chapters, grammatical errors, sentence structure and typos became more prevalent. Author, would suggest looking into getting an editor, as much of this could be fixed.

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