Well, let's go. So far, the protagonist has proved to be very consistent, very different from the cliché of a protagonist that many authors on this site are doing. His system doesn't make the protagonist OP to the point where no one can fight him, but it still makes him very strong, which is good. The background world currently seems to have a lot of consistency, because of what it was presented and how everything is unfolding, even showing some differences from our current world to the novel world in a discreet way that doesn't interrupt the reading. In the end, you didn't let me down with these chapters, and I believe that with you posting chapters every day you won't let me down in the future.

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Author has talent, what he writes is beautiful and original, but also has a major flaw. He can't continue writing a story. Once he makes a novel it will be abandoned in a couple weeks. Therefore as good as it may be it amount to nothing. I recommend not spending money on these short, unfinished stories until he starts to focus up.

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It's good with little problems for now. I just hope that the Author grows up from being a disappointment and stop dropping the Novel like all his others. The the main reason why this does not get a 4 star

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Bland narration and bad dialogue..... there are no apparent spelling errors that disturb the reading, but the text itself doesn't convey any emotion, nor is it interesting, it's just text and more text.

The novel is fairly solid and entertaining with a few small issues here and there my main concern though is the author stopping this out of nowhere like many of his other novels

i like your novel its just that you always drop it so i will start reading when your novel have 100+ chapter. i dont want to be stuck in a cliffhanger with no new chapter hahahhahahah