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This is MTL and basically unreadable. What else can I say....it's basically not understandable. Obviously there are fan translations that ARE readable... but since it's basically incomprehensible how can we really review?

As usual, just past the paywall the translation quality turns to MTL level. Nothing makes sense anymore, you stop removing the repeated paragraphs, and there's ONLY tropes. Tropes aren't necessarily bad, but there's nothing BUT tropes. It's just cliches and repeated paragraphs. None of the CONSISTENT naming (from the first 40 chapters) is honored and is now random afterwards.

There were (initially) multiple passes of editing/translation. To the point that you ACTUALLY were a better product than the pirated version. Hurray! Of course you changed translators (or they stopped putting effort) so by chapter 100 or so things started turning into basically MTL garbage. Probably actually earlier than that So... meh. It wasn't really GOOD to start out with, but there were good *points*. Once there's finally a twist and you have to read it 10 times to make sure it wasn't just a TL mistake... that's the last straw. Way too many mistakes here.

Less detail than a light novel. The translation wasn't good but it wasn't terrible during the "trial" chapters. Immediately after the paywall the translation became (in some places) worse than MTL. So yeah... why is the free product always better than the paid one?

Extremely generic. The translation is clearly unedited, and like other people suggest, probably pretty close to pure MTL (possibly a little more translation but clearly no editor). It's very generic and after about 90 chapters we still haven't learned ... basically anything about any personality/... no character growth at all. The translation is sufficiently bad and inconsistent that I'm sure I missed stuff but then they also treat Autism basically like a fatal neurological disease. This shouldn't really be allowed to exist.

... So... is this actually pirated from somewhere else or something? Copied the corrupted version by mistake? What the hell Webnovel?

Such a bachelor and a cheapskate. This MC still hasn't thought of *washing* the crystals. I mean, he's only made much more than a million dollars, it's not like he can afford a bottle of water. Please note, I'm not making fun of the story, I'm making fun of the MC. He's been consistently an idiot and the story is fun.

Please stop the all-caps. I mean this isn't even the system talking, it's Erik.

Please stop with the all-caps.

I really never understood the point of this part. Since the only thing (as far as I can tell) this thing does is measure exactly the number of links... and you're _already_ listing numbers... why not just say 1, 2, 3, 4, ..., 53, 54? It's just two numbers, it fully gets across all of the information (much more easily in fact), and no one has to remember anything. Or look anything up.