Review Detail of Vitamorte in The Last Man in the Universe

Item: The Last Man in the Universe
Rating: 5

Review detail

VitamorteLv61yrVitamorte

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Ando_Ajo

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siltas1Lv5siltas1

The English errors in the synopsis had me worried though. Have not read a chapter yet. How is the grammar looking?

Ando_Ajo:Thank you ^^

1yr

Ando_AjoAuthorAndo_Ajo

Thank you ^^

1yr

Ando_AjoAuthorAndo_Ajo

Hi Siltas1, thanks, I'll try to improve the grammar and synopsis.

siltas1:The English errors in the synopsis had me worried though. Have not read a chapter yet. How is the grammar looking?

1yr

misterbroLv5misterbro

the story seems wildly incoherent

1yr