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lohse_Lv132yr
2022-07-05 22:07

So, I think reviews only show the number of stars, not the decimals, I just want to preface this with the true rating I gave: 3.8. Very close to 4.0. If you enjoy romance novels with "bedroom scenes", then you should definitely check this novel out. I won't spoil anything but will say that you won't have to wait for hundreds of chapters like some books. I tend to like romance books without that, but if the story is good enough (and this one seems like it will have a great plot), I will read it anyway. For the most part, this book is easy to read. The chapters seem a little disjointed, causing me to be confused at times. In example, I thought the first chapter was a dream because of some statements in the second, but that is not the case. Grammatical errors aren't too bad, but they do make it more difficult to understand sometimes. I do love the author's tone. The FL is interesting and different. I can appreciate that, but I'm not sure she's all that likeable. At least, not yet. Maybe there's development on the way. Her personality makes for some interesting drama!

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trumpet_creeper01
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Its absolutely good. The first person pov is well written and didn't feel awkward later on. Did a good job on conveying the depression, self-doubt and anxiety of FL. The story has so much potential. I'd like to read future chapters.

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Mel_Aniv
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The first-person narration is smooth like butter. I can flow in the wind by just reading it. Story quality is gold and there's still much to offer. All in all, a good read for me [img=recommend] The pacing is fine and the grammar is readable. Kudos for a job well done [img=update]

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it is a well made but rookie book,story is good,characters are also good but I think there are some where you can change words and review for another time.

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It's refreshing to see good writing on this platform. Your story is effortlessly wonderful and unique in it own way and how it progresses is just so smooth.

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I love werewolf stories, especially Alpha's stories. I am a big fan of your story no doubt. I like your story too much because your story has a strong plot.

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Miss_Asriya
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The plot is great, and the writing style is amazing. Author write this in a way that readers will not be confused and that is a plus! Still need an editing at the grammar parts tho. But overall, if you like fantasy romance novels, this is highly recommended. Great job author, keep it up! Waiting for more chapters.

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SpicyChickenWriter
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The author does really well writing the FL's depression and anxiety. Also, there's really good character design and l felt bad that the FL had such a bad relationship with her mom. Usually l don't read these kinds of werewolf books primarily because of cliches and terrible writing but this book is different. I can confidently say that l will definitely be reading this more and everyone else should too!

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