Item: HIS ENCHANTED LOVER
Rating: 5

trumpet_creeper01Lv12yr

2022-07-05 17:59

Its absolutely good. The first person pov is well written and didn't feel awkward later on. Did a good job on conveying the depression, self-doubt and anxiety of FL. The story has so much potential. I'd like to read future chapters.

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