Review Detail of CrazyGrimReaper in Dan Machi: A Drunkard's Tale

I know my writing is terrible, but I strive to improve. It would be immensely helpful for you to take precious time to write a serious review. I hope it won't just be a 5-star review with the word good or emoticons. I want well-thought-out ones. Especially for bad reviews, since I will be taking those seriously as well to improve on my weaker sides in writing.