a "Devil Fruit Extractor" sounds better imo.

Just get the names right ffs. everything else seems good. I do hope you continue updating the novel tho, its pretty interesting.

dis one

Swim Swim fruit? so he can swim on land but for that, you're gonna have to kill off the current user somehow

Just give him the yami yami no mi. I don't think Teach has it yet, right?

I also don't know what echoed voice does so that's why i chose Leer since it seems kind of reasonable

I would have probably chosen Leer so i can hit harder even without additional strength.

How about Blackbeard's Yami Yami no mi or Moria's Kage Kage no mi?

Hope you dont drop this novel, its good

I like what you have done with the novel so far. So no complaints from me

You will be missed

I've read the first chapter and I think this novel is great and it'd be popular if you keep writing. Hope you update it regularly.

This danmachi fanfic does have great potential. Also the protagonist in this novel chose the venom-venom fruit which is VERY rarely used in any fanfic so I am very excited to see what the author does with it.

Great novel, looking forward to the next chapters. Keep up the good work author

This is a really good danmachi fanfic, better than most out there. improving the spelling would be nice but its not as important since you can still understand whats going on. I hope you continue updating the novel. Peace.

Nice one, looking forward to the further chapters.

he is murdering his own work. he's destroying the fanbase he has gotten so far. good job

this one

The cover photo has ulquiorra on it so that may have led many people to assume it would be the Ulquiorra template

You don't see alot of fanfics with an MC that uses the Yami Yami no mi. So I'm looking forward to further chapters 🙂