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bitwareLv52yr
2022-06-30 19:01

Author, amazing, just amazing. Never had a Harry Potter fanfic been as interesting as yours. Fascinating premise to the story, character development, and a even more incredible world background. Looking forward for more chapters.

Harry Potter, The Martial Master

BeaulenSmith
4.3
17 Chs

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BigStig97
BigStig97Lv13

Only 3 chapters so far but great quality. Interesting premise and power system. I'm definitely excited for more!! Luna for Waifu!!!!!! PLEASE!!!

3yr

Kiloreee
KiloreeeLv3

Include Hermione and Luna to harem .................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
Ptitkactus
PtitkactusLv13

was really good at the start with a mix of Magic/cultivation and skill tree like Skyrim, now it's about the perverted mc and his future harem... The personality of the mc took a 180° from a smart old cultivator reincarnating to a childlike young Master that want an harem... Go look elsewhere if you want plot :(

2yr
Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv13

Boring, different personality but still a gryffindor....................................................................,,,,.,,,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

3yr
BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Lv14

You know, I am already liking this. Hope this Harry fixes his need to save others as while he does not seem like a villain, a cultivator should always be ready to be ruthless and fight for benefits.

2yr
AyMystecs
AyMystecsLv4

The entire story just kinda blends together and instead of being a story it feels like a brief summary of things that happened off screen, overall not the worst book, but not that good either.

2yr
ShuYme
ShuYmeLv5

Its not that bad, but its at best average when it comes to fanfics on this site which isnt saying much considering the quality of most of the works on webnovel. Classic gary sue mc, he is very overpowered and everything works out for him. One dimensional characters who dont really seem to have their own opinions and just kinda do whatever the mc says. Novel is a complete powertrip, which to be fair can be fun.

2yr
CruelReality
CruelRealityLv5

It is quite decent however I cannot get past a few things. 1)No one really questions his op cultivaiton knowledge and where he got it. Nor how he could be so strong and knowledgeable yet somehow was abused by his fat normie relatives. 2)He wants a harem, enough said on that. 3)At this rate he will be way too op too fast removing all tension. 4)He trusts characters way too quick without knowing them. He doesn’t know about Harry Potter but he instantly trusts and reveals tons of info to main cast characters and dumbledore. Anyway, if you can completely turn your brain off like you would with typical Chinese novel bs you might enjoy this. I simply do not think I can continue due to the above four points.

2yr
skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv14

with all dumbles responsibilities, obviously he'll drop the ball on some of them, people making him out to be evil when he's trying to make sure everything is good.. the story is amazing so far, the only thing I don't like is the ron bashing, he's a kid trying to stand out from his super siblings they all have wants and goals, while he only wanted recognition, he lost his brother but never hated Harry, the only character worth hating should've been umbitc

2yr
ActivelyLazy
ActivelyLazyLv15

why does it seem like his mentality doesn't reflect his age and experience? it's kind of annoying. ..... ..... ..... .... .... ..... .......

2yr
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