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Kiloreee
KiloreeeLv32yr
2022-03-17 21:11

Include Hermione and Luna to harem .................................................................................................................................................................

Harry Potter, The Martial Master

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Satyam_Aggarwal
Satyam_AggarwalLv2

add greengrass sister and bellatrix also

2yr
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18484746
18484746Lv4

Why not?

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bragging2gods
bragging2godsLv4

He probably read like me some bash hermoine fanfic and now hates her character and some parts of her personality like authority worship and I know better than you tone for me I don't like her for the mentioned reasons above

18484746:Why not?
2yr
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bragging2gods
bragging2godsLv4

I agree and that is one of the reasons i stopped reading i mean there were other things that annoyed me about this novel but when harry said he wanted her in his harem i was like

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LeylinTheFifth
LeylinTheFifthLv4

Bro your review literally spoke my thoughts

2yr
jhsilver
jhsilverLv12

I always wonder when I see comments like this are you going purely by the fanfics you have read or have you bothered to actually read the Books? She is by no means a genius but just because you don't like her doesn't mean you can brush off her achievements.

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jhsilver
jhsilverLv12

Thank you for proving my point. I don't fault you for not liking her she has her faults after all, but the complete useless part is taking it a bit far.

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WebReaderPub
WebReaderPubLv14

fleur and tonks too

2yr
SpoiledSecrets
SpoiledSecretsLv5

It funny how you didn’t list a single achievement of hers.

jhsilver:Thank you for proving my point. I don't fault you for not liking her she has her faults after all, but the complete useless part is taking it a bit far.
2yr
jmori2010
jmori2010Lv15

Hermione is very annoying, especially at the beginning of the books; she's way too opinionated and forces her opinion onto others because she believes she's always right... Has no manners whatsoever, she's a sticker to rules, and authority figures. The only thing good about her is her love of studying, note I said studying and not knowledge. However her only benefit is seriously undermined by her mind's rigidity... She MUST follow all instructions to the smallest detail... She's unable to verify whether something she's read is actually true, or the most effective way to accomplish something. Sas has no creativity. For instance in The Half-blood prince we were shown how Snape as a student was able to improve all potion recipes, and even create his own spells... Even when Harry told Hermione how to improve her potions her rigid mind could now allow her to process something that goes against what's written in her book... That said, I, like the vast majority of people who still want Hermione added despite knowing all I've mentioned; for the simple fact that it's Emma Watson... If magic were real, witches and wizards would probably have much better looks due to magic... So if Hermione were real, she'd be an improved Emma Watson... Can anyone with a harem pass up on a 2.0 Emma Watson? Sure, I'll probably enslave her due to her toxic personality, or practice my Legilimency on her but I definitely wouldn't pass her up 😅 P.S. It would also sate my morbid curiosity, about what would happen to Harry and Ron without her 🤣

1yr
2
Other Reviews
BigStig97
BigStig97Lv13

Only 3 chapters so far but great quality. Interesting premise and power system. I'm definitely excited for more!! Luna for Waifu!!!!!! PLEASE!!!

2yr

Ptitkactus
PtitkactusLv13

was really good at the start with a mix of Magic/cultivation and skill tree like Skyrim, now it's about the perverted mc and his future harem... The personality of the mc took a 180° from a smart old cultivator reincarnating to a childlike young Master that want an harem... Go look elsewhere if you want plot :(

2yr
Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv12

Boring, different personality but still a gryffindor....................................................................,,,,.,,,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

2yr
BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Lv14

You know, I am already liking this. Hope this Harry fixes his need to save others as while he does not seem like a villain, a cultivator should always be ready to be ruthless and fight for benefits.

2yr
AyMystecs
AyMystecsLv4

The entire story just kinda blends together and instead of being a story it feels like a brief summary of things that happened off screen, overall not the worst book, but not that good either.

2yr
ShuYme
ShuYmeLv5

Its not that bad, but its at best average when it comes to fanfics on this site which isnt saying much considering the quality of most of the works on webnovel. Classic gary sue mc, he is very overpowered and everything works out for him. One dimensional characters who dont really seem to have their own opinions and just kinda do whatever the mc says. Novel is a complete powertrip, which to be fair can be fun.

2yr
CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

It is quite decent however I cannot get past a few things. 1)No one really questions his op cultivaiton knowledge and where he got it. Nor how he could be so strong and knowledgeable yet somehow was abused by his fat normie relatives. 2)He wants a harem, enough said on that. 3)At this rate he will be way too op too fast removing all tension. 4)He trusts characters way too quick without knowing them. He doesn’t know about Harry Potter but he instantly trusts and reveals tons of info to main cast characters and dumbledore. Anyway, if you can completely turn your brain off like you would with typical Chinese novel bs you might enjoy this. I simply do not think I can continue due to the above four points.

2yr
skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv14

with all dumbles responsibilities, obviously he'll drop the ball on some of them, people making him out to be evil when he's trying to make sure everything is good.. the story is amazing so far, the only thing I don't like is the ron bashing, he's a kid trying to stand out from his super siblings they all have wants and goals, while he only wanted recognition, he lost his brother but never hated Harry, the only character worth hating should've been umbitc

2yr
ActivelyLazy
ActivelyLazyLv15

why does it seem like his mentality doesn't reflect his age and experience? it's kind of annoying. ..... ..... ..... .... .... ..... .......

2yr
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