Review Detail of Whatthejug_0221 in Becoming a Monster

The writing quality is better than average, especially compared to a lot of novels I've read. Story development is alright, I like the fact that we also get to experience some of the struggles from the other characters, which to me is a sort of baseline of how well the mc is doing. Character design isn't the best but it's not bad, not much detail goes into the description of the characters but it's enough to imagine how they look. Updating stability can sometimes be inconsistent from what I see but as the author has a job that's to be expected, it's impressive that chapters are realeased often to begin with which means a lot of the author's free time goes into this. I respect the dedication, it reveals his compassion towards this novel. Now for world background I'm going to use the description of the area the mc starts off in as there hasn't been anything pass that yet. The descriptions are good, we get a good idea of the campus and the layout of the place, which really is all we need. Although there could be better descriptions of the area to help visualize for the reader. Overall I'm really enjoying the story so far. Though I am a bit worried of the change of personality in the mc, he's becoming a bit less "insane" then he was originally started off ever since the introduction of the love interest. None the less I'm excited to see where the story is going, keep it up author!