Honestly, it is quite mediocre. I’m gonna just say that it isn’t extremely horrendous or anything, it’s just meh. The grammar is readable, and all, but the dialogue feels kinda off. At times it can be a bit monotone and somewhat repetitive. It hollows the characters in some ways. Not to mention the pure monologues. While I know the author most likely wants to be concise and all but it just feels really masochistic to read through everything, something like quantity over quality. It does of course have its good points though, as the humor can be pretty decent at times and the usage of the system is good. Don’t take my word for it though.
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