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HatefulAutumnBreez

HatefulAutumnBreez

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Allergies...... Vice Leader of the Three Period Gang. I enjoy writing overpowered protaganists.

2021-05-04 JoinedUnited States
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez6mth
    Posted

    I don't really care about the romance part of it or whatever review bomb is going on. If you ignore of all of that, the whole fighting part and "cheat" can be pretty entertaining. I especially enjoy the Viral Hit/Manhwa crossovers. There is quite a lot that you could do with that. Please less horny. Please more people getting their heads crushed by barstools basically. Also, add capybara.

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    A life with the Author
    Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez7mth
    Commented

    A Fountain of sentient Capybaras.

    Also, suggest some NPCs for the clan base.
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    Overlord: The Path of Sin
    Anime & Comics · AzazelGrim
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez7mth
    Commented

    I want a fountain of magical capybaras.

    Ch 121 Chapter 121: Queen’s Gambit
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    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
    Book&Literature · athass_prkr
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez7mth
    Posted

    It's good but some chapters have too much Chat-GPT infused into them. Besides that, it is pretty good so far. ..................................................

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    I'm really in the Doraemon!?
    Anime & Comics · NewComer714
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez9mth
    Commented

    When is the Capybara?

    Ch 34 Chapter 29 - First Job (1/2)
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    The Omniversal Slaughter (Anime/Multi Crossover)
    Anime & Comics · Capybarian
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez10mth
    Commented

    Water Bowl. How menacing.

    Without delay, six ROOT ninjas initiated their jutsu, "Water Release: Water Bowl," causing a copious amount of water to surge forth, rapidly filling the area. The environment became saturated, as if transformed into an expansive water-filled bowl.
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    Uzumaki Fire God
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez10mth
    Replied to sapient

    thats what I said in the synopsis ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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    You're Courting Death!
    Book&Literature · HatefulAutumnBreez
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez10mth
    Commented

    *drowns to death*

    However, as the liquid level rose gradually with the infusion of the nutrient solution, Mark simply closed his eyes calmly, with a serene and unwavering expression. From this, one could tell how much confidence Mark had in his own invention.
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    Marvel: Little Genius
    Movies · Lightreaper
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez10mth
    Commented

    Bump, Set, Spike

    (Peppering is where two players practice ball control by passing the ball back and forth towards each other. This may also include hitting it towards your partner so they can try to pass it perfectly back.)
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    The Angel Spoils Me On My Way To The Top
    Anime & Comics · _Kirirei_
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez11mth
    Posted

    Honestly, it is quite mediocre. I’m gonna just say that it isn’t extremely horrendous or anything, it’s just meh. The grammar is readable, and all, but the dialogue feels kinda off. At times it can be a bit monotone and somewhat repetitive. It hollows the characters in some ways. Not to mention the pure monologues. While I know the author most likely wants to be concise and all but it just feels really masochistic to read through everything, something like quantity over quality. It does of course have its good points though, as the humor can be pretty decent at times and the usage of the system is good. Don’t take my word for it though.

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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez1yr
    Commented

    Yeh.

    Ch 47 Extra: The Interview (Part 3)
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez1yr
    Posted

    Patience is key~ The actually decent grammar and imagery help too. Just my taste but I really love the slow-burn. .......................................................................................

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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
    Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez1yr
    Commented

    No respect for art :(

    Meanwhile, the Phantom Spider sprinted toward Tombstone and delivered a powerful punch to the giant's face, sending him flying backward and crashing into an art piece. Due to his enhanced strength, he was still alive, though he was dazed.
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    Spider-Man: Absolute Godspeed
    Anime & Comics · SurelyNotEli
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez1yr
    Replied to ebrahim_bahadeli

    Most of them are original.

    Ch 56 Chapter 13: Definetly Not Excessive Use Of Force
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    You're Courting Death!
    Book&Literature · HatefulAutumnBreez
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez1yr
    Commented

    Anyone have questions?

    Ch 56 Chapter 13: Definetly Not Excessive Use Of Force
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    You're Courting Death!
    Book&Literature · HatefulAutumnBreez
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez1yr
    Replied to mow

    That's true I guess.

    He soccer kicked the guy in the head and he was out.
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    Power-Hungry in Lookism
    Anime & Comics · parkgun
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez1yr
    Replied to PolDemon

    Does a fanfiction always have to include the main chracter at the beginning of the story? I wrote that this story was a few months before the story began.

    Ch 51 Chapter 9: The Toad Caravan
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    You're Courting Death!
    Book&Literature · HatefulAutumnBreez
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez1yr
    Posted

    Putting aside a few spelling errors, I'm really liking the story. Unlike some other mostly first-person perspective fanfcitions on this platforms, it actually.... Feels. There is personality. You can feel what the main character is feeling in a way. Not to mention the fact that the author completly nailed the explosive personality along with the personality of other characters. For the most part, the imagery is on point and the diction fits. It's also in somewhat of a slow-pace which is nice. Keep up the good work!

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    My Hero Academia : The Symbol of Power
    Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez1yr
    Replied to Sin_of_GREED

    Emperor's Domination

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    You're Courting Death!
    Book&Literature · HatefulAutumnBreez
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  • HatefulAutumnBreez
    HatefulAutumnBreez1yr
    Replied to SagaLF11

    Doubtfully. I'd probably screw it up.

    Ch 49 Chapter 7: Runnin'
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    You're Courting Death!
    Book&Literature · HatefulAutumnBreez
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