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2022-07-16 12:47

The start of this novel has no sort of impact on his character whatsoever you would think all he went through u might think it will affect his personality or his relationship with people but Nah he's still the same person but I guess it sets the plot up for revenge. you introduce a new character in a story and change a few things. yet the plot is still going in the same direction really. So you mean to tell me he kept the 2 google guys cause they are smart but he just glosses over steve jobs...I'm pretty sure he must have died the same way cause up to where I read no mention of him to at least help him. All in all, it's meh I guess ok if u want a somewhat slow-paced story this is for u. Nothing special here it's not the worst, but a mile away from the best story.

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Yes, it was very summarized.

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