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Don't waste your time with this story. All the low ratings and comments are true. Wish I had read them first. The story starts with an interesting premise but by the fourth reincarnation, the author runs out of ideas and the deduction system in the title disappears. The plot is messy and details are missing. It just jumps randomly like it was written by an old chatbot. ChatGPT would have done a much better job. The first 2 reincarantions take up 48 chapters, the 3rd runs from chapter 57 to 117, but the 4th runs from 120 to 662. The 4th reincarnation forgets the MC is suppose to do things to earn points. About half way through, the author starts writing a second story with another MC that barely intersects with the main story. After that the MC gets OP and ascends to the next level at which point the author or the translator has skipped so many details the story is garbage. Towards the end, the MC throws himself into the reincarnation cycle of that world instead of returning to his own and goes off on a 5th reincarnation cycle. The 5th is a standard Wuxia trope with crippled young master dumped by finance.

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