Writing quality 👌🏻 4/5 Update schedule - _ - 3/5 Kinda weak but yeah the chapter are labored out well so it is understandable story development ( I can’t give a zero as I still don’t want to rate story development this early on) not too bad tho I guess cuz no harem BS and kinda intriguing? No idea... the story just began what do u expect? It does trigger me a lot that the mc gets chikorita tho XD 😂 Character design 4/5 Finally a normal one which doesn’ t lead the plot astray with bipolar delirious tendencies of omnipotence World background 4/5 Tho my judgement cannot be trusted on this one as I didn’ t understand a couple of things and didn’ t go back to get a proper grip on them as I skidaddled through the book PROFANITY ( I said it! I’m sick and tired of this cancel culture so I said the P WORD, and what?? Try me!)
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Honestly, I'm just more of the opinion that if you need to use profanity to get your point across all the time, it weakens you as a writer. TBH if you read the Kurtherian Gambit series by Michael Anderle, I think you'll get my point. That's not to say that profanity at appropriate times isn't immensely useful. But my parental warnings are ore for what going to happen in chapter 20.
Wait it was a joke… u didn’t get it? XD
Smileykiller2797:Honestly, I'm just more of the opinion that if you need to use profanity to get your point across all the time, it weakens you as a writer. TBH if you read the Kurtherian Gambit series by Michael Anderle, I think you'll get my point. That's not to say that profanity at appropriate times isn't immensely useful. But my parental warnings are ore for what going to happen in chapter 20.
Oh i got it, but thats a hill i will always die on. 😉😁
Wandering_Soul_UwU:Wait it was a joke… u didn’t get it? XD
Nice. 🫡
Smileykiller2797:Oh i got it, but thats a hill i will always die on. 😉😁