I really like the story, it's not fast paced as I would prefer in a fanfic but at the same time it makes up for it with quality. The story has a pretty good cover too, it's definitely Naruto but at the same time it does well to reflect the seriousness of a more intelligent naruto. It's in fact one of my favourite outfits for Naruto as of yet. I'm not sure how to go about saying things here without spamming spoilers. The last chapter I read ended with one of several extra classes he wouldn't find out about until much later if he put in a little more effort. To me that was slightly disappointing because if anything this Nano system has caused him to put in extra effort. So it felt a bit like a miss on his more serious character. I won't deny that this is the story I hope to see a new chapter for each time I come on WN tough. It's just that interesting and it doesn't spam some rediculous near insta win stuff that most system type fics have. The Nano system he got won't allow him to cheaply buy stuff etc, it actually is all his effort. Sorta like an AI that has one of those real life video game apps that you can get on your phone, enter tasks into and complete them as if it were a video game. Allowing you to level up and have a sense of accomplishment and progress that real life otherwise lacks. This system is like that. Naruto doesn't actually level up or get rewards beyond the fruits of his own labour. It's just quantified by the Nano system which helps him focus on his progression and asking the right questions which he then seeks the answers to. This all in all makes the Nano system seem much more wholesome than the stuff people usually write. So yeah good job.
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