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DaoistoFK9tM
DaoistoFK9tMLv32yr
2022-03-28 14:24

This is good in terms of development, the character is describe in details but not much that it leaves no room for development As for guns and firearms concepts, it's ok but I hope you don't overdo it as many other have done the same and they even brought in many futureristic weapons that it makes the story go insane I would recommend to focus more the development of Dorne rather than just weapen, how they can use sand to create glass and perhaps dive into their Rhony past ancestry.

Game of Thrones: Unbowed, Unbent, Unbroken

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41 Chs

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TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13

The story is ok? Not much happens and everything is described pretty strangely (youll seee what i mean for yourselves) but other than that its just an “eh” story. Theres definitely better GOT novels on the site. I rated it lower becahse of that and because the MC uses a bow and arrow 💀 i lost all interest in the story after that (sorry just not my cup of tea)

2yr

KAGE88
KAGE88Lv1

Breat story can not await for more.

2yr
Zenos_Maxima2611
Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1

For the quality of writing, I give three stars. Why? because what I read from the beginning to the middle was only a narrative, minimal dialogue. Well, although in the mid to late there is an increase. Also, tell me when to update again. I think this is great! especially when the MC introduced gunpowder and hot guns to the world of Game of Throne. I'm also waiting for the civilization revolution from Dorne.

2yr
Mastersun
MastersunLv1

The plot, though simple, is quite interesting, the construction of the world is quite understandable, and the most important thing in this work is to observe how the author is improving in the quality of writing.

2yr
BukanOrang
BukanOrangLv13

You need to continue this story because I'm fuvking love it!!! This might be the best asoiaf fanfic I've ever read and its a shame if you did not continue this. A bit mix of Assassin's Creed with the cloak brothers and his pet eagle but not a cringe ones like other people who wrote the crossover of that one

2yr
Hellblaze
HellblazeLv1

Man, I love this GOT fanfic, the way the story is narrated through journal entries and general POVs is absolutely amazing and gives this fanfic in my opinion a fresh feeling. Author-san thank you for this and I hope you continue this as soon as possible I know that you are busy with the Eternals fanfic but I hope you come back and continue this as soon as possible.

2yr
Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4

Whaaaaaat? 41 chaps and last update was 1 YEAR AGO!?

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AgustinaGM18
AgustinaGM18Lv10

Me encanta esta historia!!! ya quiero ver como continua la historia. Saludos!!!!![img=monedas][img=monedas][img=monedas] ......................................

2yr
AgustinaGM18
AgustinaGM18Lv10

Excelente capitulo como siempre!! Realmente admiro a morían porque podría haber tomados otras daciones y vengar a Elia como a Dorne. Espero que no le pase nada a Elia ni a sus hijos no se lo merece

2yr
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