Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in NEVERMORE The Place is Destroyed Vol.1

There are several things I like about this novel. The story is interesting. You are creative with the tools you use to engage the audience. The dialogue is solid. There are also several areas where this story could be improved. One thing I noticed is that you summarize things too much. When I say that I mean the story does describe the events enough. Remember, show don't tell. There are times when the novel feels more like an article than a story or novel. I encourage you to keep going, author. Writing is a gradual journey of steadily growing. I wish you the best on your journey ahead and feel free to ask me if you want any feedback on anything else.