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BobboLobbo
BobboLobboLv42yr
2022-03-04 06:38

This story was not what I was expecting, it went from meh to good to extremely bad. Naruto got betrayed and wised up and forgave the people who betrayed him with no real revenge all in the span of 1 chapter. And the amount of OC's is too annoying to keep up with.

The Golden Fox

Hyuga_Tobirama
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Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15

here's the thing I don't understand how could Naruto be banished for failing to bring back a traitor that is a stupid premise

2yr
9
BobboLobbo
BobboLobboLv4

Exactly, why would the council throw away their jinjuriki?

Gh0st00:here's the thing I don't understand how could Naruto be banished for failing to bring back a traitor that is a stupid premise
2yr
8
Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15

its a villages greatest "weapon" yet they banish it smh... dont think author thought this thru

BobboLobbo:Exactly, why would the council throw away their jinjuriki?
2yr
4
Trollface
TrollfaceLv1

++

2yr
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

yes the council wanted to get rid of sasuke if they were not able to manipulate him so , anyways Naruto would not be punished anyways

Gh0st00:here's the thing I don't understand how could Naruto be banished for failing to bring back a traitor that is a stupid premise
2yr
1
D3molish3r
D3molish3rLv3

that's what people call maturing. I mean no one was to blame other than the council and civilians as naruto's friends except for sasuke, Sakura and ino were pretty chill with him even after seeing nine tales power in chunin exams

1yr
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Ben_39
Ben_39Lv1

Went from to good to extremely bad! His Teacher talks 2 sentence and he forget 12-15 years of abuse from the Village. Why even bother to bannish him if everything is just vorgotten in the fist 5 Chapters.

2yr

lightning_devil
lightning_devilLv13

a very dumb novel, author can't decide how naruto should behave, he writes something else as thoughts, but does completely different in the next chapter.

2yr
asaade
asaadeLv10

a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto

2yr
ArSolaris
ArSolarisLv4

Of course there aren't many chapters yet, but I have greatly enjoyed what's been written so far. it diverges from canon pretty greatly, and it does so in a way I enjoy quite a lot. It's well-written, the grammar is good, pacing feels pretty good.. overall great and I hope it continues to be written.

2yr
skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv14

read this on ff before hated it then, still hate it now, too many OCs and then there's the Sasuke booty licking, doormat Naruto girl isn't even interesting, personality wise girl also trash... can't think of any reason why the author had the bawls to write something as dumb

2yr
D3molish3r
D3molish3rLv3

One of the best stories I have read in the Naruto series...if u are interested in a betrayed Naruto story where he gets a reality check and is not dumb af and learns to forgive people then I guess this will be ur cup of tea. Though others should still give it a try as I was the same as you and learned to love this premise

1yr
Shivam_Singh
Shivam_SinghLv5

Reveal spoiler

2yr
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