webnovel
ArSolaris
ArSolarisLv42yr
2022-02-24 07:31

Of course there aren't many chapters yet, but I have greatly enjoyed what's been written so far. it diverges from canon pretty greatly, and it does so in a way I enjoy quite a lot. It's well-written, the grammar is good, pacing feels pretty good.. overall great and I hope it continues to be written.

The Golden Fox

Hyuga_Tobirama
Not enough ratings
42 Chs

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
BobboLobbo
BobboLobboLv4

This story was not what I was expecting, it went from meh to good to extremely bad. Naruto got betrayed and wised up and forgave the people who betrayed him with no real revenge all in the span of 1 chapter. And the amount of OC's is too annoying to keep up with.

2yr

Ben_39
Ben_39Lv1

Went from to good to extremely bad! His Teacher talks 2 sentence and he forget 12-15 years of abuse from the Village. Why even bother to bannish him if everything is just vorgotten in the fist 5 Chapters.

2yr
lightning_devil
lightning_devilLv13

a very dumb novel, author can't decide how naruto should behave, he writes something else as thoughts, but does completely different in the next chapter.

2yr
asaade
asaadeLv10

a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto a doormat naruto

2yr
skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv14

read this on ff before hated it then, still hate it now, too many OCs and then there's the Sasuke booty licking, doormat Naruto girl isn't even interesting, personality wise girl also trash... can't think of any reason why the author had the bawls to write something as dumb

2yr
D3molish3r
D3molish3rLv3

One of the best stories I have read in the Naruto series...if u are interested in a betrayed Naruto story where he gets a reality check and is not dumb af and learns to forgive people then I guess this will be ur cup of tea. Though others should still give it a try as I was the same as you and learned to love this premise

1yr
Shivam_Singh
Shivam_SinghLv5

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Related Stories

Konoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara

(T/N: There is now a Patreon for this work, and any new work I add will be dropped there first. check it out for an early release of up to 30 chapters edited smoothly. https://www.patreon.com/INeedRest) Ps: I'm not the original writer for this, this was edited by me. ******************* Traveling to the world of Hokage, Kamiyo Colt witnessed the chaos of the Nine Tails firsthand. Without any special powers initially, he planned to develop quietly and survive until the Infinite Tsukuyomi. However, when he first trained his Chakra, his system finally activated. The system's rules were simple: By healing others, he could gain random attributes and skills. "Heal Uzumaki Naruto to receive pure Ashura Chakra!" "Heal Uchiha Shisui to gain his bloodline talent!" "Heal Sasuke Uchiha to obtain pure Indra Chakra!" In this way, Colt steadily developed his abilities over more than ten years. During the Fourth Ninja World War, when the ninja coalition saw him suddenly knock out the Six Paths Madara with a single punch, he looked innocently back at them. "What? I'm a medical ninja. Doesn't it make sense to defeat him with one punch?"

INeedRest · Anime & Comics
4.8
295 Chs

Naruto : Shadow King

What will happen when a random soul is born in the world of Ninja as a Nara? He found himself as Shikamaru's cousin. Right at the start of the cannon. What will he do when he knows what is going to happen in the world? Orochimaru, Akatsuki, Pain, Obito, Madara, That damn moon goddess. What to do? And then he got the system. TEN SHADOWS. So, is he a Shinobi or a Sorcessor? Will he keep his light? Or he will embrace the SHADOWS? Naruto doesn't belong to me, this story is just for fun and all that shit. Don't sue me, please. Upload on:- Sunday to Friday. Bonus Chapter on Monday and Sunday. ******************************** (P)(A)(T)(R)(E)(O)(N) LINK: patreon.com/Kamidemond ********************************* I'm planning on keeping a stockpile of at least 20 chapters there. DISCORD Discord invite: https://discord.gg/VqU83N2As4 *The Cover is not mine, tell me if you want me to remove it, just don't sue me!!!

kamidemond · Anime & Comics
3.8
104 Chs

One Piece:The Lust System

A man from Earth wakes up to find himself in a world he once believed to be mere fantasy, only to discover its stark reality—a place where life holds no value, where danger lurks at every turn, and where pirates roam freely. The corruption of the world government and the marines adds another layer of difficulty to an already chaotic existence. He understands the challenges that lie ahead if he is to survive in this unforgiving world. However, as a traveler from Earth, he possesses a unique advantage—a 'cheat' of his own. -- [Ding! The communication between body and spirit has been successfully completed! The system is now operational!] -- With this newfound power, Ren embarks on a journey to carve out his path to glory and power, determined to etch his name into the annals of history—a history that he himself will shape! -------------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: All characters in the story are not mine except for some OC's. Tags: #Harem #R-18 #Romance #No NTR #No Yuri

Yass_Odyssey · Anime & Comics
4.8
158 Chs

Marvel login system

Arthur Morgan is an ordinary adult who ended up in the chaotic Marvel universe. He just wanted to be a discreet writer and make money from his books. It also has a 'cheat'. A daily login system. As the name suggests, whenever he logs in once a day he gains something from the system, ranging from skills to completely useless items. … One day, Arthur found a blonde girl passed out at the door of his house. "Why the hell is there a girl passed out on my doorstep!?" ---------------- If you want to read advanced chapters, take a look at my Patreon. patreon.com/Supreme_Dragon_God Any fanfics I work on in the future will be updated first there and then here on WN If you want to join the Discord server just use this link: https://discord.com/invite/GSddex8xhY

Supreme_Dragon_God · Anime & Comics
3.8
79 Chs

In Konoha, This Naruto Has Decided To Take It Easy

This time, the soul-transferred Naruto no longer worries about his lineage and ignores those strange looks, binding himself to the 'Take It Easy System'. [Option 1: Pursue Sakura. Reward: S-Rank Ninjutsu.] [Option 2: Pursue Hinata, avoid ten years of detours. Reward: Kyubi’s approval (you can use Kyubi’s Chakra at will)] Is that even a question? Naruto decisively chooses Hinata. Naruto fishes by the river, and Mizuki suddenly appears. Mizuki: "Naruto, do you want to become stronger?" [Option 1: Refuse Mizuki’s invitation and tell him to get lost. Reward: Full level Fishing Mastery.] [Option 2: Accept Mizuki’s invitation and steal the Scroll of Seals. Reward: Impure World Reincarnation (Incomplete)] Naruto: Is there even a choice? Sandaime Hokage: "Where tree leaves dance... one shall find flames... the fire's shadow will illuminate the village... and once again tree leaves shall bud anew." Naruto: "Smooth!" --------------------------------------- Support me at https://www.patreon.com/IamPoorGuyToo There are advanced chapters there

Iampoorguy · Anime & Comics
3.3
194 Chs
Login