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Sehajpal_Singh_7232
Sehajpal_Singh_7232Lv41yr
2024-04-13 12:48

Bro the story has a lot of loop holes from the beginning and there are things that are not like in harry potter. yes natural legilimence is a thing but they cannot change or control others emotions from the get go they have to study mind art first to some high degree to even start changing an emotion tho they can put a thought in others mind before learning mind arts. As for finding out that he is a wizard the MC should have known it is called accidental magic for a reason.

Harry Potter: outlier

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flys36
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How are you supposed to know what this book is about if there is no synopsis?

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Fishsaint
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I really like the story so far. Him being natural legimens is exciting and refreshing, not to mention really cool. I won't comment on the grammar, because english isn't my first language. However i'am totally satisfied. There are no useless sentences or unreadable nonsense as of yet. I'am however only 5 chapters in. So i have to wait and see. In my opinion the Author is doing a great job and i'am excited to see more😊

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Reveal spoiler

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Empty_3737
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Keep going padwan. Love the story. No Harem. Lucas x Holly.... I guess or maybe Tracy :I I am just filling up characters Just don't do Harem. Pls pls pls

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DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6

If your interested what the story is about its about a guy ego gets reincarnated at the same age as potter the world is AU and potter family is still alive and he has a twin sister everyone is more powerful and smarter just so you know. The mc is natural mind reader unlockes his magic at age of 5 with being able to sense emotions passively eithout entering there mind he is from a muggle family as for mc knowledge he knows harry potter plot but as i said this is a AU where everything is stronger i wont go into details but its not as easy to take down the troll as it was in the original mc is fine he doesn’t meddle with harry and is sister does his things lesrns new magic uses mind control for few chapters when he became colder the reasons you got to read to find out it is a good read only if there was more chapters lol

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Raven_Remke
Raven_RemkeLv13

Very confusing read, just not my cup of tea

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MrAzathoth
MrAzathothLv4

a gem so far im good with everything just hoping for more update

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Daoist102230
Daoist102230Lv1

I liked the story, so far nothing much has happened, but with the climate that is being created it is possible to notice that there will be a very dark touch in the future. The main character so far does not care about the feelings of those around him, in addition to his mother. I believe that due to the possibilities of future directions of history, it is worth reading and following.

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J'en ai marre des fanfiction qui me font perdre mon temps avec des héros qui ne réussisse absolument rien........... ................................................................................................................

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