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2024-07-23 09:54

Wanted to read this book. However stop myself as there so many negative reviews on the grammar. I feel WEBNOVEL shld set a rule on the novels writings as WE the readers have to PAY to read it!!!!! It’s not fair for us to pay for all the errors made.

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