Item: Empress Is Too Powerful
Rating: 2.4
Author: DaoistycJtuv

DaoistycJtuvLv44mth

2024-06-30 06:57

Very bad grammar. It makes difficult to follow the plot. If it is a translation, should get a better one. If it’s an attempt to write in English, should learn the basics. He/him/his= referring to a male She/her/hers= referring to a female. As for reviewing, it will be unfair to count with it because I couldn’t get pass the third chapter. But I will go with what I got so far.

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