Item: You Think I Won't Talk?
Rating: 4
Author: Yolande_Duggan

Yolande_DugganLv151yr

2023-02-09 09:23

This is a unique transmigration novel where we actually have TWO female leads. The inner dialogue is (currently) 100% from our transmigrator but the original soul still resides within the body as a passive presence. The transmigrator Eli absolutely adores the original soul Marianne which is really enjoyable to read about. The interaction between Eli/Marianne and her father the Duke is so sweet. And the encounters with the Crown Prince so far are filled with tension and attraction which bodes really well for future 19+ scenes LOL. The only downside to the novel is that I think a good editor would recommend more balance between inner dialogue and story progression because I tell you, you can spend 3 or more chapters just reading the "mind dribble" that is going on before breakfast is even over. I am skipping ALOT of it because it's endless and I want the story to progress. Which means I'm probably skipping things like character development but honestly, it's sometimes a little much. Especially when you are paying a premium for the chapters. But overall, I'm still sticking with it because I think the potential is there. Recommend to others if you have lots of coins and lots of patience.

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moon_sighterLv3

i love your comment i have this same issue about FL inner thoughts. Your way of elaborating the whole thing is on another level The best comment i read so far[img=recommend][img=gift]

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