Item: You Think I Won't Talk?
Rating: 4.4
Author: IntanLestari

IntanLestariLv112yr

2022-10-08 16:18

I'm not gonna lie, this is one of the best written novel here, the pace actually is too slow to my liking but the writing style is what mesmerized me, it's really vivid experience, I'm not surprised if the author is a graduate from literature school/college

You Think I Won't Talk?

XimenoideX

4.8

599 Chs

Liked by 4 people

Replies5

IntanLestariLv11

ok i already read at 51 now, this is reaaallly slow pace, more like a slice of life with some angst in it, I'm frustrated with the plot even though the writing style is good, like why didn't she ask her father to help the problem with her brother? she could ask for a bodyguard who doesn't leave her at all even when she's with her brother.. i think she won't solve any of her problems in hundreds of chapters

2yr

XimenoideXAuthor

Haha, it truly is slow-paced. What I want is for the readers to discover all these frustrating points along the character. However (as I'm also frustrated lol) I do not plan on leaving it as it is for hundreds of chapters hahahaha. Thank you very much for your kind words~ I felt ecstatic with this review. I hope that maybe once the novel has progressed more you could give it a new try and if that is not the case, thank you for coming by to see how it is [img=recommend]

IntanLestari:ok i already read at 51 now, this is reaaallly slow pace, more like a slice of life with some angst in it, I'm frustrated with the plot even though the writing style is good, like why didn't she ask her father to help the problem with her brother? she could ask for a bodyguard who doesn't leave her at all even when she's with her brother.. i think she won't solve any of her problems in hundreds of chapters
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2yr

IntanLestariLv11

i will give it a new try after there are more chapters in this novel as I'm a fast reader so i could see if there's more development to her character, thank you for writing this novel 🥰

XimenoideX:Haha, it truly is slow-paced. What I want is for the readers to discover all these frustrating points along the character. However (as I'm also frustrated lol) I do not plan on leaving it as it is for hundreds of chapters hahahaha. Thank you very much for your kind words~ I felt ecstatic with this review. I hope that maybe once the novel has progressed more you could give it a new try and if that is not the case, thank you for coming by to see how it is [img=recommend]

2yr

XimenoideXAuthor

How lovely! Thank you too for taking the time to read it!! 🥰

IntanLestari:i will give it a new try after there are more chapters in this novel as I'm a fast reader so i could see if there's more development to her character, thank you for writing this novel 🥰

2yr

moon_sighterLv3

yes still no response from her and aaaah her inner thoughts are annoying

IntanLestari:ok i already read at 51 now, this is reaaallly slow pace, more like a slice of life with some angst in it, I'm frustrated with the plot even though the writing style is good, like why didn't she ask her father to help the problem with her brother? she could ask for a bodyguard who doesn't leave her at all even when she's with her brother.. i think she won't solve any of her problems in hundreds of chapters
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