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TheWandaShip
TheWandaShipLv142yr
2022-08-17 18:02

I am at chaoter 40 atm, while the general flow, grammer, plot, world background and etc is good, for some reason it feels "off" to me when i read this fanfic. Idk, i can't put it into words, but it feels "strange"(??) to read

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Just_A_Bastard
Just_A_BastardAuthor

If strange means unique then that's great. Even then, my fanfic being strange means that I at least left a mark in your memory. Thank you for the review! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Crus_reads
Crus_readsLv14

for me after 50 chapters i cant find any seriousness in the main character, and the other characters like ayaka i cant immerse in it due to there mocking and sassy tone of talking

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Layios
LayiosLv11

After reading all available chapter so far, I can say that this FF isn't bad nor good. This is my second big reading of genshin FF ( first is journey through teyvat ). Tbh, VOL 0 or the so-called prolog was tbh very annoying to read and even a waste of time (to me), I can just recall that MC got killed during a big event - > he got along well with girls that's all. Personality wise, MC is unlikable (to me), story is heavily focused on comedy because of it's protagonists and with his light joke (he think it is), for a ex-sage/more than thousands y-old man being so childish is in a way impressive but also annoying to say the least. He is also pretty much sexual harassing most female character ( these so-called girls doesn't rly mind 'cause of protagonists-halo ). Anyways, as you can see I have a very bad opinion of this story MC, not that I'm asking for y'all to be like him, you can all try to read it then you'll understand. One bad point too is, too much character and they're mostly bland with just some very important characters that seems humanlike (a bit?). The plot seems to be a slice of life adding a kindgom building? Idk, not rly sure bout it, it's rly too hard to understand what's the end goal of all this. Another point that I wanted to talk about is, his fate system/gold finger (idk if there is) or smthg like that seemed to be pretty non-existent, it's mentioned only a few times in hundred of chapter. Anyways that's the end of my rambling bout this novel, If you have plenty of time to waste then go on, if not just put away to read it later.

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