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Claudia_Lv142yr
2022-08-07 20:45

I feel like the fanfic lost potential when the author changed the mc's personality, he feels like a different person all together,the fate part was unnecessary actually. I was also hoping for a better romance with ei, it was too quick tbh.

Genshin Impact Uncanny Obsession

Just_A_Bastard
4.3
111 Chs

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Just_A_Bastard
Just_A_BastardAuthor

That was my plan from the start. Scratch that, this fanfic is supposed to be a Makoto X Sasayuri LOL. But I don't want it to finish that fast. Plus I'm not really good at romance... Thank you for the review! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Shameless author doing a shameless review! We are nearing the end of the 2nd volume. And I must say, even though there were some issues that came out, I really enjoyed writing this story. On a serious note, though, don't be afraid to give reviews cuz I won't bite. It doesn't matter to me if it's a good or a bad one. We authors only have this option to see our readers' feedback. Same with comments too. Peace!

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I really like this a lot. Overall a great fanfic that you should give a read. There are only a few grammar errors, such as an uncapitalized “i” but it only occurs in one chapter. Also, nice

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After reading all available chapter so far, I can say that this FF isn't bad nor good. This is my second big reading of genshin FF ( first is journey through teyvat ). Tbh, VOL 0 or the so-called prolog was tbh very annoying to read and even a waste of time (to me), I can just recall that MC got killed during a big event - > he got along well with girls that's all. Personality wise, MC is unlikable (to me), story is heavily focused on comedy because of it's protagonists and with his light joke (he think it is), for a ex-sage/more than thousands y-old man being so childish is in a way impressive but also annoying to say the least. He is also pretty much sexual harassing most female character ( these so-called girls doesn't rly mind 'cause of protagonists-halo ). Anyways, as you can see I have a very bad opinion of this story MC, not that I'm asking for y'all to be like him, you can all try to read it then you'll understand. One bad point too is, too much character and they're mostly bland with just some very important characters that seems humanlike (a bit?). The plot seems to be a slice of life adding a kindgom building? Idk, not rly sure bout it, it's rly too hard to understand what's the end goal of all this. Another point that I wanted to talk about is, his fate system/gold finger (idk if there is) or smthg like that seemed to be pretty non-existent, it's mentioned only a few times in hundred of chapter. Anyways that's the end of my rambling bout this novel, If you have plenty of time to waste then go on, if not just put away to read it later.

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I don't why but this story just feels weird to read, i can't really describe it. The writing quality is good as is the background but it just feels off for some reason.

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